this will be the hardest explanation ill ever do: I mean how all the characters talk like they are in the hood which uh half the time i didn't understand it well cuz English isn't my first language
the only character I meant to sound like that was maxwell and maybe Carlos lol yeah if English isn't ur first language u will defiantly have a harder time understanding
Really liked the art in this game! It was definitely what drew me to check it out. Everyone's designs are endearing with how colourful and expressive they are. The interactions are really cute too. Excited for what you have in store!
In terms of improvements, I think there are some pacing issues, especially with the first meeting between the player and Donovan being as short as it was. The AI art was a bit jarring to see too, since a lot of them were a bit warped and gnarly looking. Felt like it distracted from the scene a lot of the time.
Other than that, keep up the good work man! Excited to see what you got in store!
I think xour VN has a lot of potential! π The characters are well contrived, and I really like some of the interactions between them. However, I do think the VN could use a good polish.
Most of the scenes are a bit too short to fully encapsulate all of the emotions and/or importance of the moment. Focusing on every other scene in the same way that xou did the sex scene will really help to express these moments better π
At the moment I just want to get the basics of the story out on paper and everything else. In the future when I feel the game is is completed Iβm gonna re work everything. A good polished! This is my first VN I ever made so Iβm still have a lot to improve on. lol as I improved as an artist and writer so will this game.
Sounds like a good plan π I'm sure xou'll see a difference from when xou started xour VN and when xou complete it πJust keep writing/drawing 'n xou'll get there! π xou're talented, so just keep at it π
Ooh there I had totally forgotten there is notification of this update of this VN currently I have just finished even if it was short I still have which mainly makes the atmosphere behind all that I still hope that there would be many more comments but it seems that the community here prefers to remain silent
Well I'm going to start with the update so it's really nice I like the rest the music now I really got into it even if it was short but I liked it he's a real DJ so I'm happy I hope the community can like your
Thank you very much. Im sorry it was short lol its just me working on the game and this update was a lot more work than i though LOL. But i still had fun.
Hmm Oscar is the protagonist so that doesn't count Eddie my favorite and Maxwell my second favorite and that's it and also it doesn't matter if it's short :)
that's really cool. I'll be starting on maxwell route. He will be one of four dateable characters. I'm learning how to make routes choices. Maxwell is a little more edgy than the other characters but he's silly too lol
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nice vn, having a weird kind of writing all side
im wondering tho how I didn't get to see any of those special pictures
Oh you must mean the ones with Donovan and Maxwell right?
Those were in the old version of the game.
Yeah, I'm not the best writer lol I'm learning
this will be the hardest explanation ill ever do: I mean how all the characters talk like they are in the hood which uh half the time i didn't understand it well cuz English isn't my first language
so yah :)))))))))
the only character I meant to sound like that was maxwell and maybe Carlos lol yeah if English isn't ur first language u will defiantly have a harder time understanding
lol i wont lie, i tried to rap it so that maybe i get what they were saying
Hahahah! xD
Really liked the art in this game! It was definitely what drew me to check it out. Everyone's designs are endearing with how colourful and expressive they are. The interactions are really cute too. Excited for what you have in store!
In terms of improvements, I think there are some pacing issues, especially with the first meeting between the player and Donovan being as short as it was. The AI art was a bit jarring to see too, since a lot of them were a bit warped and gnarly looking. Felt like it distracted from the scene a lot of the time.
Other than that, keep up the good work man! Excited to see what you got in store!
Yeah im definitely gonna make make my own backgrounds in the future lol.
this my first vn so I just getting the basic the story down on paper. In the future I plan on giving this game a huge polish!
I'm still improving as an artist and as I a improve so will my VM! π
That's really encouraging to hear! Thank you so much for being so receptive! Wishing the best with the development!
By the way do you have any socials where you post your art? Would love to see more of it sometime!
Hmm not at the moment no π€
I post some rough ideas and sketches here for time to time though π
Excited to see them as they come! Loving what you have for Maxwell so far!
I think xour VN has a lot of potential! π The characters are well contrived, and I really like some of the interactions between them. However, I do think the VN could use a good polish.
Most of the scenes are a bit too short to fully encapsulate all of the emotions and/or importance of the moment. Focusing on every other scene in the same way that xou did the sex scene will really help to express these moments better π
thank you very much!
At the moment I just want to get the basics of the story out on paper and everything else. In the future when I feel the game is is completed Iβm gonna re work everything. A good polished! This is my first VN I ever made so Iβm still have a lot to improve on. lol as I improved as an artist and writer so will this game.
Sounds like a good plan π I'm sure xou'll see a difference from when xou started xour VN and when xou complete it πJust keep writing/drawing 'n xou'll get there! π xou're talented, so just keep at it π
I enjoyed the VN so far, great work all-around.
Ooh there I had totally forgotten there is notification of this update of this VN currently I have just finished even if it was short I still have which mainly makes the atmosphere behind all that I still hope that there would be many more comments but it seems that the community here prefers to remain silent
Well I'm going to start with the update so it's really nice I like the rest the music now I really got into it even if it was short but I liked it he's a real DJ so I'm happy I hope the community can like your
Thank you very much. Im sorry it was short lol its just me working on the game and this update was a lot more work than i though LOL. But i still had fun.
tell me who's your favorite character so far?
Hmm Oscar is the protagonist so that doesn't count Eddie my favorite and Maxwell my second favorite and that's it and also it doesn't matter if it's short :)
that's really cool. I'll be starting on maxwell route. He will be one of four dateable characters. I'm learning how to make routes choices. Maxwell is a little more edgy than the other characters but he's silly too lol
silly ? I want to see that xD